On second thought, her useful tips and pointers are pretty commonsensical and I doubt it's worth the price to be reminded of. Try providing sensory details other than visual Consider describing something by negation and try to find something surprising about the object you are describing Describe an object in motion if not try using active verbs Use descriptive, not explanatory or labeling words Her useful advice can be listed as follows: It actually made me angry and frustrated to be reading about something that, to me, had little to do with "description." There are some useful advice and exercises, I admit, but after about page 100, it loses focus and starts to ramble on about topics that are MUCH better dealt by other books, such as characters, point of view, setting, and plot.
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